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Drowning

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I look up from the depths
To find an undulating mirror.
Shifting shapes so freely
And hiding the world beyond.
Lightheaded, I gasp for the surface
And break free from my anamorphic prison.
Cooked it up in second period today. :D
I really have no clue what my inspiration was.

EDIT: 3/23/10: Changed "sub-surface" to anamorphic (last line)
It's now A LOT more concise.
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Niiice. I'm loving the imagery in this one! =D